Friday, November 21, 2014

Course Recap for Friday November 21, 2014

**Extra Credit**
Find an article with a persuasive argument that you believe is ineffective and in a 1 to 2 page paper explain why you think so.
Consider the following questions.
1. How well does the author utilize ethos, logos, and pathos? Does the article appeal to people's emotions (pathos)but fails to provide evidence (logos) for their claim? Or does the writer lack the credibility to discuss the topic and fails to provide support from people who do(ethos)? Maybe the article is well reasoned (logos) but offensive to its readers (pathos).
2. Look at the evidence they provide to support their argument. Is their logic sound? Does it contain any logical fallacies?
3. How fair is the argument? Does the author address opposing viewpoints?
You can receive up to 10 extra credit points. You can do this for 3 different articles.

Homework
**For your argument paper.**
Make sure your paper is Times New Roman, 12pt font, double spaced.
Make sure you have a Works Cited Page attached. (This is your annotated bib without the descriptions.)
Make sure you address and refute the opposing viewpoints for your argument.
Make sure you have in-text citations. Anything that you take from an outside source even if you paraphrase it has to be cited.
Your Final Draft is due Wednesday November 26 by midnight.

Friday, November 14, 2014

Course Recap for Friday, November 14, 2014

Homework


  • Your annotated bibliography on 6 sources for your persuasive argument paper is due Sunday.
  • Before we meet on Friday, you have to write the first draft of your paper and exchange it with a partner.  (YOUR ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY IS NOT YOUR PAPER.  IT IS JUST A DESCRIPTION OF YOUR SOURCES.)  You are going to fill out the paper labeled Argument Paper Response underneath Class Documents.  The two of you need to talk about how and when you plan to exchange papers, so that you can edit and respond to their drafts.  You need to bring in (or email) the completed response guide and the draft of their paper with your edits and comments when you come into class Friday.  This should be completed when you walk in the classroom.  Do not expect to have class time to complete this assignment.  You will not.
  • A 5-page play loosely related to your argument piece.  It should include a prop that is an object that is being used for some other purpose than what it was made of. (examples a pillow as a cloud, a sheet as a cape, yarn as hair, an umbrella as a peg leg) Please make sure that your characters have clear desires and that there is something that is keeping them from getting what they want. 
Playwriting Format

Here is how you format a play.

TOM
I have to write a play and I don't know how to do it.

JANE
That's okay.  I will teach you. First you write your character name.  Then you hit enter and you write their dialogue.  After you finished writing their dialogue, you hit enter twice and then you write the next characters line and so on and so forth until you're finished.  It should not be double-spaced.  It should look exactly how it is on this blog.

TOM
Wow! That sounds easy.

JANE
It is. (Holds up hand.)  Don't forget to put stage directions in parentheses and then italicize them. Stage directions are any actions you want your characters to do on stage.

TOM
Will do.  Thanks Jane for all your help.

JANE
You're welcome, Tom.

End of Play

A playwriting tip.  Please don't write a play that sounds like the one written above.  




Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Course Recap for Friday, October 31, 2014

Logical Fallacies

In class, we looked at logical fallacies (See Logical Fallacies underneath Class Documents).  These are incorrect arguments based on bad logic.  For instance, let's look at the following claim: 65% of Americans distrust the government, so the government cannot be trusted.  The arguer is assuming that because the majority of Americans thinks it, it must be true.  However, remember that the majority of Americans at one point thought slavery was morally good for society. Appealing to popular opinion is a logical fallacy.  The only thing that statistic proves is that the government is not trusted by a majority of Americans.  It does not prove that Americans have a valid reason for feeling this way.  

Your first homework assignment is to find an editorial (opinion piece) from your favorite online publication (The New York Times, Buzzfeed, FOXNews, etc.) and find an article that contains one or more logical fallacies.  Explain which fallacies the articles contain and why you believe this. Remember a person can make a claim that you agree with and still back it up with a poor argument.  Referring to the above example again, you may agree that the American government is untrustworthy; however, the above statistic is a bad way to prove this point.  We are trying to distinguish good evidence from bad evidence.  Bad evidence makes your argument weak.

Conspiracy Theories

People who believe very strongly in conspiracy theories distrust people especially those in power and do not believe in chance.  They believe that everything happens for a reason and the cause is usually human agency.  Because of this, most conspiracy theories are backed up by weak evidence that usually contains several logical fallacies.  

In class we looked up conspiracy theories and found evidence to support those theories.  Then we found the logical fallacies hidden within the evidence.  For instance, for the moon landing hoax, one of the arguments is "the waving American flag."  In the live video, the flag appears to be waving in what most people assume is a breeze.  The problem is there is no wind on the moon.  Therefore, the video could not have been taken on the moon.  It is true that there is no wind on the moon.  This is a fact.  However, the conspiracy theorists don't take into account the fact that there are several other things that could cause the flag to ripple or wave besides wind.  This is a StrawMan argument.  We're presenting a true fact (There is no wind on the moon) to prove that we didn't go to the moon, and we don't take into consideration other factors.  We're omitting details and only presenting the facts that support our argument.

For homework, you are going to write a letter to a conspiracy theorists pointing out the problems with their arguments and offering up your own explanation of what really happened.  For the sake of this assignment, we're going to assume the official story really happened.  It is okay for you to believe in your conspiracy theory, but it is important that you critically look at the evidence so you fully understand what you're buying into.  You may have to research the other side to make sure you have a full understanding of the story.  So to put it simply, you're explaining why they're wrong and you're right.  This should be however long it takes you to make your points.  At least a page. ;)


Revisions for Your Final Two Analysis Papers

By the end of tonight, you should have turned in a revision of the analysis paper you chose to research.  Next Sunday, you will be turning in your revisions of your other two analysis papers.  These do not have to include research but they have to improve greatly from the first draft.  Here are some tips for your revision.

  • Make sure you have a very strong specific thesis (theme).  The in-class activity we did with your movie themes applies to your songs and your stories, as well.  Make sure you aren't just trying to prove that your movie is about a hardworking, caring person.  Anyone who watches your movie can tell that.  What is the movie saying about people who are hardworking and caring?  How does the world treat them?  How do they end up in the end?  Why is this person hardworking and caring?  The more questions you ask the better your thesis will probably be.  
  • Cut unnecessary information.  Get rid of any summary that does not support your thesis and does not provide info needed for people to understand the events that do support your thesis. 
  •  Do not introduce your topic.  Don't talk about how songs/movies/stories have deeper meanings.  We don't need that.  Just start talking about your piece.  
  • While you're not required to have research for all 3 papers, don't be afraid to look up a few things if you have doubts about your theme or if you feel it can strengthen your paper.  

Samples of Good Themes  (which you cannot use)
  • The Lion King emphasizes the importance of people learning not to live in the shadow of their parents and to make their own marks on the world.
  • Cinderella teaches women to be passive and to depend on men for their happiness.
  • The darkness in Sonny's Blues represents the helplessness the residents of Harlem feel because of their limited opportunities.
  • The poem The Day Lady Died shows how music can unite people from extremely different backgrounds.
  • In Life of Pi, the tiger represents Pi's worst enemy, his own self. 


Homework

Sunday, October 26, 2014

Course Recap for Friday, October 25, 2014

Example of MLA Format for Online Sources

Author Name. "Title of Webpage/Article." Title of Website were Webpage is Hosted. Article Date.                 Medium (Web). Date you accessed it.

Moses, Mickey. "Course Recap for Friday, October 27, 2014." ENGLISH 1050: Thought and                         Writing. 27 Oct 2014.  Web.  27 Oct 2014.

Homework

  • Choose either your song, movie, or one of the three short stories you wrote a paper on to do research for.  You will look for sources that help support your analysis of the piece. You want to find 6 sources.  After you've found your six sources you will create an annotated bibliography (see Sample Annotated Bibliography in sidebar under Class Documents for an example).  You will write each source in MLA format and underneath write a paragraph describing the source and its relevance to your paper.  Do not limit your research to only sources about your piece.  You can also find sources about ideas or issues that are presented in your piece.  For instance, if you wrote about "The Yellow Wallpaper" you can find sources about the treatment of women in the 1800s or the treatment of mental illness during this time period. This is due Monday.
  • You will use your research and my detailed feedback (you will receive this Monday or Tuesday) to revise your paper for Friday.

Friday, October 10, 2014

Course Recap for Friday, October 10, 2014

Homework

  • 500-word analysis on a song of your choice.  Pick one theme or message from your song then point to the lyrics that let's the reader know why you believe this is the theme or the message.  Keep in mind that people can interpret the exact same line differently.  You're explaining your own line of thinking.
  • 750-word analysis on Sonny's Blues.  You're still thinking about themes and messages in this piece.  Some things for you to consider.  What does darkness symbolize in the piece?  What is the difference between the narrator and Sonny and how does it affect their relationship?  What role does drugs play in Sonny's life?  What role does music play on the piece?  The story is about two black men in 1950s America.  How does that affect the way you interpret the story?
  • Read the following three short stories (find them in the sidebar under Class Documents).  Write me a one sentence theme for each one.  Then choose one of the three themes to write a 750-word paper on. 
  • The Yellow Wallpaper by Charlotte Perkins-Gilman
  • A Rose for Emily by William Faulkner
  • Virgins by Danielle Evans
You should turn in 3 papers next Friday.

Monday, October 6, 2014

Course Recap for Friday, October 3, 2014

Carrie Analysis

We spent the first half of the class period examining the different patterns and themes in the movie, Carrie.  We dug deep into the psychology of the characters and examined certain choices that creators of the piece made.  For instance, we determined that the sin Mrs. White is constantly trying to destroy in Carrie is really her own sin, and that there were several different messages the writer might have been sending by having Carrie discover her powers right when she gets her first period.  It could have been to say that women are crazy, unstable creatures, or the choice could have been made to illustrate that women are powerful beings.  We looked at the repetition of the color red and all the things it could symbolize (blood, death, anger, hatred, passion) and talked about why it shows up in certain scenes and how it contributes to the overall message of the piece.

Afterwards, we broke into groups, and each group was given a question to answer about the movie Carrie.  The first group talked about what the movie Carrie had to say about sin and purity.  That group believed that the movie Carrie said that sin, particularly sexual sin, led to death, corruption, and mental illness.  The only kind and sane character is Sue who is very pure in comparison to Mrs. White, Carrie, and Chris, all of whom die while she survives.

The second group looked at what Carrie said about bullying and came to the conclusion that in the movie, Carrie, bullying is like a disease that affects everyone it touches and the consequences pass from one person to another.  Nobody escapes, the victim nor the bully.

The third group talked about Carrie and womanhood and about how Carrie receives her power and her womanhood at the same time that leads her down a path of self-discovery.  She starts making decisions for herself and gains a power she never had before.  

The last group talked about what the movie Carrie says about self-identity.  In the movie, Carrie, the only character to survive is the one character who made the decision to go against the grain and to not fit in which is Sue.  Unlike her peers she feels guilty for what she did to Carrie in the shower and she gives up going to prom even though she knows everyone will make fun of her.  All of the good moments in the movie happen when someone decides to do the unpopular thing.  The touching moments between Carrie and Tommy occur because Tommy stepped out of his comfort zone. 

Each of the questions we looked at could serve as a topic for their own paper.  Notice how we picked a specific aspect of the film, (a character or theme or event) to focus on.  This is the best way for you to write a paper that truly analyzes a piece and doesn't just summarize it.  We looked at things that kept coming up in the piece (the idea of sin, blood, bullying) and asked why do these things keep coming up? What is the writer and/or director trying to say about all of this?  How do these things relate to real life?

Homework
  • Write a 750-word analysis of a movie or your choice.
  • Read Sonny's Blues by James Baldwin (you can find it in the sidebar under Class Documents)

Friday, September 26, 2014

Course Recap for Friday, September 26, 2014

Homework

  • Write a 750-word narrative about a place that is significant to you.  Try to narrow down one or two events that showcase the impact this place has had on your life.
  • Read 3 articles on Carrie. (1) Horror, Femininity, and Carrie's Monstrous Puberty (2) Cult Movie Review: Carrie (3) Pretty Bloody: Women and Stereotypes in Horror
  • Read Sonny's Blues