Friday, November 21, 2014

Course Recap for Friday November 21, 2014

**Extra Credit**
Find an article with a persuasive argument that you believe is ineffective and in a 1 to 2 page paper explain why you think so.
Consider the following questions.
1. How well does the author utilize ethos, logos, and pathos? Does the article appeal to people's emotions (pathos)but fails to provide evidence (logos) for their claim? Or does the writer lack the credibility to discuss the topic and fails to provide support from people who do(ethos)? Maybe the article is well reasoned (logos) but offensive to its readers (pathos).
2. Look at the evidence they provide to support their argument. Is their logic sound? Does it contain any logical fallacies?
3. How fair is the argument? Does the author address opposing viewpoints?
You can receive up to 10 extra credit points. You can do this for 3 different articles.

Homework
**For your argument paper.**
Make sure your paper is Times New Roman, 12pt font, double spaced.
Make sure you have a Works Cited Page attached. (This is your annotated bib without the descriptions.)
Make sure you address and refute the opposing viewpoints for your argument.
Make sure you have in-text citations. Anything that you take from an outside source even if you paraphrase it has to be cited.
Your Final Draft is due Wednesday November 26 by midnight.

Friday, November 14, 2014

Course Recap for Friday, November 14, 2014

Homework


  • Your annotated bibliography on 6 sources for your persuasive argument paper is due Sunday.
  • Before we meet on Friday, you have to write the first draft of your paper and exchange it with a partner.  (YOUR ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY IS NOT YOUR PAPER.  IT IS JUST A DESCRIPTION OF YOUR SOURCES.)  You are going to fill out the paper labeled Argument Paper Response underneath Class Documents.  The two of you need to talk about how and when you plan to exchange papers, so that you can edit and respond to their drafts.  You need to bring in (or email) the completed response guide and the draft of their paper with your edits and comments when you come into class Friday.  This should be completed when you walk in the classroom.  Do not expect to have class time to complete this assignment.  You will not.
  • A 5-page play loosely related to your argument piece.  It should include a prop that is an object that is being used for some other purpose than what it was made of. (examples a pillow as a cloud, a sheet as a cape, yarn as hair, an umbrella as a peg leg) Please make sure that your characters have clear desires and that there is something that is keeping them from getting what they want. 
Playwriting Format

Here is how you format a play.

TOM
I have to write a play and I don't know how to do it.

JANE
That's okay.  I will teach you. First you write your character name.  Then you hit enter and you write their dialogue.  After you finished writing their dialogue, you hit enter twice and then you write the next characters line and so on and so forth until you're finished.  It should not be double-spaced.  It should look exactly how it is on this blog.

TOM
Wow! That sounds easy.

JANE
It is. (Holds up hand.)  Don't forget to put stage directions in parentheses and then italicize them. Stage directions are any actions you want your characters to do on stage.

TOM
Will do.  Thanks Jane for all your help.

JANE
You're welcome, Tom.

End of Play

A playwriting tip.  Please don't write a play that sounds like the one written above.  




Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Course Recap for Friday, October 31, 2014

Logical Fallacies

In class, we looked at logical fallacies (See Logical Fallacies underneath Class Documents).  These are incorrect arguments based on bad logic.  For instance, let's look at the following claim: 65% of Americans distrust the government, so the government cannot be trusted.  The arguer is assuming that because the majority of Americans thinks it, it must be true.  However, remember that the majority of Americans at one point thought slavery was morally good for society. Appealing to popular opinion is a logical fallacy.  The only thing that statistic proves is that the government is not trusted by a majority of Americans.  It does not prove that Americans have a valid reason for feeling this way.  

Your first homework assignment is to find an editorial (opinion piece) from your favorite online publication (The New York Times, Buzzfeed, FOXNews, etc.) and find an article that contains one or more logical fallacies.  Explain which fallacies the articles contain and why you believe this. Remember a person can make a claim that you agree with and still back it up with a poor argument.  Referring to the above example again, you may agree that the American government is untrustworthy; however, the above statistic is a bad way to prove this point.  We are trying to distinguish good evidence from bad evidence.  Bad evidence makes your argument weak.

Conspiracy Theories

People who believe very strongly in conspiracy theories distrust people especially those in power and do not believe in chance.  They believe that everything happens for a reason and the cause is usually human agency.  Because of this, most conspiracy theories are backed up by weak evidence that usually contains several logical fallacies.  

In class we looked up conspiracy theories and found evidence to support those theories.  Then we found the logical fallacies hidden within the evidence.  For instance, for the moon landing hoax, one of the arguments is "the waving American flag."  In the live video, the flag appears to be waving in what most people assume is a breeze.  The problem is there is no wind on the moon.  Therefore, the video could not have been taken on the moon.  It is true that there is no wind on the moon.  This is a fact.  However, the conspiracy theorists don't take into account the fact that there are several other things that could cause the flag to ripple or wave besides wind.  This is a StrawMan argument.  We're presenting a true fact (There is no wind on the moon) to prove that we didn't go to the moon, and we don't take into consideration other factors.  We're omitting details and only presenting the facts that support our argument.

For homework, you are going to write a letter to a conspiracy theorists pointing out the problems with their arguments and offering up your own explanation of what really happened.  For the sake of this assignment, we're going to assume the official story really happened.  It is okay for you to believe in your conspiracy theory, but it is important that you critically look at the evidence so you fully understand what you're buying into.  You may have to research the other side to make sure you have a full understanding of the story.  So to put it simply, you're explaining why they're wrong and you're right.  This should be however long it takes you to make your points.  At least a page. ;)


Revisions for Your Final Two Analysis Papers

By the end of tonight, you should have turned in a revision of the analysis paper you chose to research.  Next Sunday, you will be turning in your revisions of your other two analysis papers.  These do not have to include research but they have to improve greatly from the first draft.  Here are some tips for your revision.

  • Make sure you have a very strong specific thesis (theme).  The in-class activity we did with your movie themes applies to your songs and your stories, as well.  Make sure you aren't just trying to prove that your movie is about a hardworking, caring person.  Anyone who watches your movie can tell that.  What is the movie saying about people who are hardworking and caring?  How does the world treat them?  How do they end up in the end?  Why is this person hardworking and caring?  The more questions you ask the better your thesis will probably be.  
  • Cut unnecessary information.  Get rid of any summary that does not support your thesis and does not provide info needed for people to understand the events that do support your thesis. 
  •  Do not introduce your topic.  Don't talk about how songs/movies/stories have deeper meanings.  We don't need that.  Just start talking about your piece.  
  • While you're not required to have research for all 3 papers, don't be afraid to look up a few things if you have doubts about your theme or if you feel it can strengthen your paper.  

Samples of Good Themes  (which you cannot use)
  • The Lion King emphasizes the importance of people learning not to live in the shadow of their parents and to make their own marks on the world.
  • Cinderella teaches women to be passive and to depend on men for their happiness.
  • The darkness in Sonny's Blues represents the helplessness the residents of Harlem feel because of their limited opportunities.
  • The poem The Day Lady Died shows how music can unite people from extremely different backgrounds.
  • In Life of Pi, the tiger represents Pi's worst enemy, his own self. 


Homework